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But when are we going to start seeing some real submissions from you? MAKE SOME MOVIES
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I was having toruble finding out how to go back to the menu to try out other paths. I could just be stupid, but maybe giving a clear menu for that would be great, still very good.
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Add sound and context, and slow down your zooms, add a bit more detail, and it would have been pretty dang good.
Author's Response:
thanks, im VERY new to flash so most of this was jsut motion tweens and artwork that i drew in photoshop, ill hopfuly make somthing better soon, is i figure out where the sound thing is
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"Odd, scratchy, and slightly irritating"
and yet, still decent somehow. Clean up your style a little and try to have clear story - or, failing clear story, at least cleaner transitions from scene to scene. I'm not sure yet how this would be a series. ANd even though the scene with the dog was nice, it was a little creepy to se ehim lick the wound. Maybe with cleaner graphics it wouldn't be too bad. Definently not bad for a first go.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I will continue to try to improve the style, this was experemental, being my first flash movie. I have a good idea for a series, with more characters and an over arching story. I hope you decide to check out my future animations ;P
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For ruining my childhood the same week Family Guy Did
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Although I never understood why anyone who can animate like this would do stick movies with no plotline. The sound quality could also have been better.
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Honestly didn't know I was going to like this flash til after the preload and opening. But it was very cool.
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Not too bad. It got boring without anything but the fly moving. The dialogue went back and forth between funny and lame. I just think that there was a lot of style potential here that was lost on a lame storyline and lack of imagination. I would very much like to see a revised and expanded version of this, I think it would rock.
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I guess I'm a sucker for a octopus in a top hat. Was the pet at the beginning - was - was his name Mr. Blue Suck Face? Because I'm stealing that for my goldfish.
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If you were going to expand on this, I would like to see more detailing in your characters and backgrounds. I also would assume you would have more fps, which would be grand. YOu do have a keen eye for timing though, like whe you went to the black and white, it worked well.
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