Its not very good. However, if this was your first, keep making movies and getting better. There was no plot or point to this, nor a preloader, or anything else, but I'm curious to see how good you could be.
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Its not very good. However, if this was your first, keep making movies and getting better. There was no plot or point to this, nor a preloader, or anything else, but I'm curious to see how good you could be.
there definately is a plot, if you're not retarded.
A duo straight from the depths of hell
And that's where I'm going for enjoying this video.
Not bad really
Add sound and context, and slow down your zooms, add a bit more detail, and it would have been pretty dang good.
thanks, im VERY new to flash so most of this was jsut motion tweens and artwork that i drew in photoshop, ill hopfuly make somthing better soon, is i figure out where the sound thing is
GOod Stuff
But when are we going to start seeing some real submissions from you? MAKE SOME MOVIES
Oh god another crack game
I was having toruble finding out how to go back to the menu to try out other paths. I could just be stupid, but maybe giving a clear menu for that would be great, still very good.
Boring
If you're going to make a game with time limits, put up a clock or some sort of timer. Add more detail, take a little more time over the objects, and for the LOVE don't write things like j00 sUxxor or whatever the hell you wrote. Lame.
I really like it alot
THe only problem is when the piano melody comes in but is alone with the background, it sounds unmatched. When the accordian sound comes back, it works again. ITs almost like the happy, bouncy piano sound doesn't quite mix with the rest of it. I love it anyways, its interesting and has a slightly twisted side to it. But I'd like to hear a few more versions with different piano melodies added in - similar, just less bubbly. I'm not a music expert, so I'm sorry if this didn't make much sense.
I can't decide
I'm really torn. I like the inventive lack of structure - its like a poem thats really good even though it doesn't rhyme or stick to meter, but its also unpleasently bouncing around. I think it would be perfect with a little more cohesiveness tying everything together. Otherwise it feels more like sound effects than a 'song'. But if thats what you were going for than awesome job.
A lot of that has to do with my total ignorance about things like measure and meter and all that. I'm kind of just learning as I go. I'm glad you liked it though. Thanks for the review.
Holy shit
That is pretty incredible. I'm usper impressed by how you could actually convey where his beard is thickcker on his chin and gets thinner near his ears - I have never been able to do that. All of your lights and shadows are nearly ferfect on the face and hat. Very very very nice, and I am jealous of your talent.
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