Delina's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clown Incarceration]

Its not very good. However, if this was your first, keep making movies and getting better. There was no plot or point to this, nor a preloader, or anything else, but I'm curious to see how good you could be.

FiveToes responds:

there definately is a plot, if you're not retarded.

[Babies]

A duo straight from the depths of hell

And that's where I'm going for enjoying this video.

[Slightlyman]

Not bad really

Add sound and context, and slow down your zooms, add a bit more detail, and it would have been pretty dang good.

Dannthecameraman responds:

thanks, im VERY new to flash so most of this was jsut motion tweens and artwork that i drew in photoshop, ill hopfuly make somthing better soon, is i figure out where the sound thing is

[Intro to My Life]

Odd, scratchy, and slightly irritating

and yet, still decent somehow. Clean up your style a little and try to have clear story - or, failing clear story, at least cleaner transitions from scene to scene. I'm not sure yet how this would be a series. ANd even though the scene with the dog was nice, it was a little creepy to se ehim lick the wound. Maybe with cleaner graphics it wouldn't be too bad. Definently not bad for a first go.

Prestokey responds:

Thanks, I will continue to try to improve the style, this was experemental, being my first flash movie. I have a good idea for a series, with more characters and an over arching story. I hope you decide to check out my future animations ;P

[The Disney Collab]

Thanks

For ruining my childhood the same week Family Guy Did

[SN stickweekly no.1]

Not too bad at all.

Although I never understood why anyone who can animate like this would do stick movies with no plotline. The sound quality could also have been better.

[NoMoreFairytales]

Nice.

Honestly didn't know I was going to like this flash til after the preload and opening. But it was very cool.

[Mr Nice & the UWSG]

How the hell did I enjoy that?

I guess I'm a sucker for a octopus in a top hat. Was the pet at the beginning - was - was his name Mr. Blue Suck Face? Because I'm stealing that for my goldfish.

[JTFE (short): The Can]

Decent for starters

If you were going to expand on this, I would like to see more detailing in your characters and backgrounds. I also would assume you would have more fps, which would be grand. YOu do have a keen eye for timing though, like whe you went to the black and white, it worked well.

[Masked Stick Fight]

Decent animation, but otherwise nothing great

Hey, a good stickfight is a good stickfight, and there's nothing at all wrong with that. But this was only so-so. THe animation was smoother than your average stickfight, but thats not really the highest bar.Stick with it and get ambitious. YOu'll end up a good artist.

quanmandetil responds:

Thanks for being so optimistic. I know this isn't the best of animations out there, but I was trying to do a real frame-by-frame this time. I'm actually just relieved it got in!