Its not very good. However, if this was your first, keep making movies and getting better. There was no plot or point to this, nor a preloader, or anything else, but I'm curious to see how good you could be.
there definately is a plot, if you're not retarded.
Add a preloader. Get the details done. I like it.
Totally, planning to add the "replay" stuff tonight hopefully.
Cheers for watching mate!
A duo straight from the depths of hell
And that's where I'm going for enjoying this video.
Not bad really
Add sound and context, and slow down your zooms, add a bit more detail, and it would have been pretty dang good.
thanks, im VERY new to flash so most of this was jsut motion tweens and artwork that i drew in photoshop, ill hopfuly make somthing better soon, is i figure out where the sound thing is
Odd, scratchy, and slightly irritating
and yet, still decent somehow. Clean up your style a little and try to have clear story - or, failing clear story, at least cleaner transitions from scene to scene. I'm not sure yet how this would be a series. ANd even though the scene with the dog was nice, it was a little creepy to se ehim lick the wound. Maybe with cleaner graphics it wouldn't be too bad. Definently not bad for a first go.
Thanks, I will continue to try to improve the style, this was experemental, being my first flash movie. I have a good idea for a series, with more characters and an over arching story. I hope you decide to check out my future animations ;P
For ruining my childhood the same week Family Guy Did
Not too bad at all.
Although I never understood why anyone who can animate like this would do stick movies with no plotline. The sound quality could also have been better.
Honestly didn't know I was going to like this flash til after the preload and opening. But it was very cool.
How the hell did I enjoy that?
I guess I'm a sucker for a octopus in a top hat. Was the pet at the beginning - was - was his name Mr. Blue Suck Face? Because I'm stealing that for my goldfish.
Decent for starters
If you were going to expand on this, I would like to see more detailing in your characters and backgrounds. I also would assume you would have more fps, which would be grand. YOu do have a keen eye for timing though, like whe you went to the black and white, it worked well.
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