Delina's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clown Incarceration]

Its not very good. However, if this was your first, keep making movies and getting better. There was no plot or point to this, nor a preloader, or anything else, but I'm curious to see how good you could be.

FiveToes responds:

there definately is a plot, if you're not retarded.

[Slightlyman]

Not bad really

Add sound and context, and slow down your zooms, add a bit more detail, and it would have been pretty dang good.

Dannthecameraman responds:

thanks, im VERY new to flash so most of this was jsut motion tweens and artwork that i drew in photoshop, ill hopfuly make somthing better soon, is i figure out where the sound thing is

[Intro to My Life]

Odd, scratchy, and slightly irritating

and yet, still decent somehow. Clean up your style a little and try to have clear story - or, failing clear story, at least cleaner transitions from scene to scene. I'm not sure yet how this would be a series. ANd even though the scene with the dog was nice, it was a little creepy to se ehim lick the wound. Maybe with cleaner graphics it wouldn't be too bad. Definently not bad for a first go.

Prestokey responds:

Thanks, I will continue to try to improve the style, this was experemental, being my first flash movie. I have a good idea for a series, with more characters and an over arching story. I hope you decide to check out my future animations ;P

[Masked Stick Fight]

Decent animation, but otherwise nothing great

Hey, a good stickfight is a good stickfight, and there's nothing at all wrong with that. But this was only so-so. THe animation was smoother than your average stickfight, but thats not really the highest bar.Stick with it and get ambitious. YOu'll end up a good artist.

quanmandetil responds:

Thanks for being so optimistic. I know this isn't the best of animations out there, but I was trying to do a real frame-by-frame this time. I'm actually just relieved it got in!

[Awesome Video Games - Ep2]

Ow.

I can get what you were going for, but both of you yelling constantly just drove me insane. Maybe it wasn't even the yelling, maybe it was just the sound editing, I don't know. I did enjoy it to an extent, and I loved the opening, but that was the only real flash in it. The rest was video, and Newgrounds is a flash site, not a video sight, so I couldn't justify giving you a real high score. I'd vote high on youtube though.

FarFromSubtle responds:

Thanks for watching dude!

Remember Newgrounds is "EVERYTHING, BY EVERYONE."

Stay AWESOME!

[Prehistorik:Beautiful Day]

Hehe!

That was nice. Add a prelaoder, and you got yourself a 5/5 from me. Nice character design, it was cute!

EpicPopcorn responds:

There is a preloader actually!

[PunWisp vs. JerdanMan]

Not bad for a sprite movie....

If NG has to have sprite movies, this is the way to do it. Somehow I feel ,like many of these things were inside jokes (ie Megaman popping out of a poke ball),l but I laughed pretty hard at it anyway. You have very good comedic timing,l and your animation had some simply delightful details.

Short-Factor responds:

Oh, no inside jokes. Just complete randomness.

[Scary School Teaser]

Looks like it'll be good

My only suggestion would be in future to slow down your framrate so that it actually matches the movement - the animation was super fast and Oh Fortuna simply isn't a fast song. Otherwise, nice and smooth, the way I likes it!

TurboBadger responds:

Okay. I'll put that into consideration. Thanks.